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National Service (aka TheoTown wutbox)
Posted: 13 Nov 2017, 14:00
by Lancer
Hello guys, this story will be very diffrent from the stories you've seen in TT.
It is not done yet. Its finished form will be in the form of ms word document and with book cover, headings and book stuffs, there will probably be 2 languages, Bahasa Indonesia, and English.
It will be about missions and operations of PI-07 and past. Maybe notable events. It will be based around:
1) Origins (obviously)
2) Hijacking of V.C.S Poseidon
3) Hostage of Cheyanne Mall
4) Beefburg Train Station threat
5) Engagements in Findonezia communism conflict
6) Smuggler.
5 & 6 will be included if not too long.
Chapters will be posted either monthly or per 2-4 months.... it needs thought ok?
I haven't even finished developing the characters and some stuff....
Re: National Service
Posted: 13 Nov 2017, 14:36
by khadafi laidi
Mantap
Re: National Service
Posted: 13 Nov 2017, 18:45
by Ahmad Nur Aizat
Wut
Re: National Service
Posted: 13 Nov 2017, 19:14
by Ahmad Nur Aizat
Also, what's with Celery Mall and Hamburger Train Station?
Buildings made out of the foods? XD
Re: National Service
Posted: 14 Nov 2017, 05:58
by -LeoLeo-
Ahmad Nur Aizat wrote: ↑13 Nov 2017, 19:14
Also, what's with Celery Mall and Hamburger Train Station?
Buildings made out of the foods? XD
It's like
Cloudy with a chance of meatballs all over again...
Man, I LOVE that movie.The sequel is... Okay.
Re: National Service
Posted: 14 Nov 2017, 06:07
by Ahmad Nur Aizat
-LeoLeo- wrote: ↑14 Nov 2017, 05:58
Ahmad Nur Aizat wrote: ↑13 Nov 2017, 19:14
Also, what's with Celery Mall and Hamburger Train Station?
Buildings made out of the foods? XD
It's like
Cloudy with a chance of meatballs all over again...
Man, I LOVE that movie.The sequel is... Okay.
Flint reinvents the FLDSMDFR. Or should I say...
The FLI-SUP-FDFERF
Re: National Service
Posted: 14 Nov 2017, 09:51
by Lancer
-LeoLeo- wrote: ↑14 Nov 2017, 05:58
Ahmad Nur Aizat wrote: ↑13 Nov 2017, 19:14
Also, what's with Celery Mall and Hamburger Train Station?
Buildings made out of the foods? XD
It's like
Cloudy with a chance of meatballs all over again...
Man, I LOVE that movie.The sequel is... Okay.
Celery Mall its named that way because i had no idea about the name, i might change it to Cheyanne Mall. About Hamburger TS though, im poking fun at the real life city in German Hamburg, i might change it to Beefburg.
Re: National Service (aka TheoTown wutbox)
Posted: 19 Nov 2017, 13:47
by Lancer
Guys, i need ideas for 4 main protagonist male character.
Re: National Service (aka TheoTown wutbox)
Posted: 19 Nov 2017, 13:49
by Lancer
and 2 main female antagonist, and 5 main male antagonist
Re: National Service (aka TheoTown wutbox)
Posted: 19 Nov 2017, 13:58
by Ahmad Nur Aizat
I'll be that protagonist! XD
Re: National Service (aka TheoTown wutbox)
Posted: 19 Nov 2017, 14:00
by Brody Craft
You're a king of Sedile.
Re: National Service (aka TheoTown wutbox)
Posted: 19 Nov 2017, 14:04
by Ahmad Nur Aizat
Brody Craft wrote: ↑19 Nov 2017, 14:00
You're a king of Sedile.
I'll clone myself! XD
Re: National Service (aka TheoTown wutbox)
Posted: 19 Nov 2017, 14:05
by Brody Craft
I'll kill your Clone.
Re: National Service (aka TheoTown wutbox)
Posted: 19 Nov 2017, 14:07
by Ahmad Nur Aizat
I can deploy more!
Re: National Service (aka TheoTown wutbox)
Posted: 19 Nov 2017, 14:07
by Brody Craft
Kill even more.
Re: National Service (aka TheoTown wutbox)
Posted: 19 Nov 2017, 14:09
by Ahmad Nur Aizat
Me and Brody will be the main protagonists!
Problem solved B)
Re: National Service (aka TheoTown wutbox)
Posted: 20 Nov 2017, 09:51
by Lancer
OK, your callsign will be Brody: Governor (Staff Sergeant. (sorry mate))
Ahmad: Ambassador (First LT.)
Re: National Service (aka TheoTown wutbox)
Posted: 20 Nov 2017, 15:26
by Ahmad Nur Aizat
Ambassador of what?
Re: National Service (aka TheoTown wutbox)
Posted: 20 Nov 2017, 16:04
by Ahmad Nur Aizat
Wut wat
Re: National Service (aka TheoTown wutbox)
Posted: 20 Nov 2017, 16:52
by Ahmad Nur Aizat
Wut