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[Story]Fort Zancudo Invasion

Posted: 31 Jul 2017, 11:20
by Luigi
The story of the most ancient city in fairview coast, Fort Zancudo and its history
(inspired by most storytellers)

Part 1
Back when fairview coast was discovered in 1389 most of the inhabitants were living near the shores a happy life and theres this man name "Antonio" who wished to live in the mountains alone because of the poorness in the shores of montega, Antonio's mother who is "Risha" and his father "Mando" was a hardworking parents to support their son dream's. Antonio's parents didnt know any wish of Antonio. Antonio's parents were clueless about their son and just focusing on their work to support Antonio. Their house is located near a river in mavela. One day he asked permission to his parents to go play at the woods with his friends, the parents agreed and as antonio leaved, he tried to escape from his family and went to a mysteriously creepy woods, Antonio was lost and scared... he coudnt find a way back home, many munites later he is still wandering around like a lost dog, he was hungry at the time and he found a fruit he couldnt identify but he furiously ate it because he was hungry! after that he felt dizzy spinning for 10 munites and immediately went down. He was sick because of the fruit that is not common in the area, a black shadowed man with broken legs was looking at a sleeping kid and he picked it up... Antonio woked up unknowingly in the top of a mountain and that mountain was Mt. Areva, he looked down with fear and tried to move a bit and he fell rolling down at the steep hill, he somehow survived and found a plate with food in it, he was looking down at the ground seeing a plate but when he tried to look up he saw the man that picked him up. Antonio said "wh-who are you..." the man said "you will know after you eat and get well" the man gaved antonio a lot of food and antonio was so hungry he ate it all, the man was shocked... And the story continues (next part, im tired). :mine

Re: [Story]Fort Zancudo Invasion

Posted: 31 Jul 2017, 11:22
by Luigi
Let me know what you guys think! :space :bc

Re: [Story]Fort Zancudo Invasion

Posted: 31 Jul 2017, 11:26
by Skyhunter117
Hey thats pretty good!
You reminded me to start Act 4.

Re: [Story]Fort Zancudo Invasion

Posted: 31 Jul 2017, 11:28
by Luigi
Skyhunter117 wrote:
31 Jul 2017, 11:26
Hey thats pretty good!
You reminded me to start Act 4.
Thanks! :ugeek:

Re: [Story]Fort Zancudo Invasion

Posted: 31 Jul 2017, 13:06
by Luigi
Working on part 2, and adding pictures.

Re: [Story]Fort Zancudo Invasion

Posted: 03 Sep 2017, 13:39
by TheFennekin
@Luigi[Posts][PM]

When is Part 2?

Re: [Story]Fort Zancudo Invasion

Posted: 03 Sep 2017, 14:02
by Luigi
completely forgot about this fantasy story of an invasion :idea:

Re: [Story]Fort Zancudo Invasion

Posted: 03 Sep 2017, 14:04
by Luigi
i think this story does not fit in my theme, this sucks
i made this pretty much for fun
Im gonna make a new legit one soon just gotta make a script :space

Re: [Story]Fort Zancudo Invasion

Posted: 23 Sep 2017, 16:06
by CommanderABab
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Re: [Story]Fort Zancudo Invasion

Posted: 02 Oct 2017, 14:34
by Luigi
What?

Re: [Story]Fort Zancudo Invasion

Posted: 02 Oct 2017, 15:46
by Ahmad Nur Aizat
Is this the end of this story?

Re: [Story]Fort Zancudo Invasion

Posted: 03 Oct 2017, 02:45
by TheFennekin
A new story will come soon so it's maybe the end for this one and another Fort Zancudo invasion story better than this one just to make a script... @Luigi[Posts][PM] said

Re: [Story]Fort Zancudo Invasion

Posted: 03 Oct 2017, 06:12
by Luigi
I thought that this was too fantasy or magical because of the story


I will have to create one where story is based not on a hero instead the people of zancudo

Re: [Story]Fort Zancudo Invasion

Posted: 03 Oct 2017, 09:25
by Ahmad Nur Aizat
Fathers of Zancudo!